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Rosary

the first bead
your eyes were bottomless wells
where coins and unfulfilled dreams slowly drowned
beautiful lies about eternity
spellbound me

the second bead
of your hands
my words are not enough
though my skin that tells of how they wandered
night after night over naked skin  

the third bead
in your arms the maps of my country were redesigned
virgin land broken into pieces
and my eyes’ waterfall drowned the earth
gave birth to deluge

the fourth bead
we let our words become swords
slash the air between us two and cutting all promises
the shiny scars on my hands
prevent me from signing the peace treaty

the fifth bead
your love is like the ocean
infinitely beautiful
fatal and unpardonable
shipwrecked, without sight of land

the sixth bead
you dug a hole in my chest
removed what you found and kept it
lost it
being heartless you know not the difference


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