so you keep telling me

song on repeat. you sing the words to my face. keep on telling me. and i might start to believe you. where you ever anything more than a beat to dance to. was i ever more than a heartbeat to fall in love with. we danced around this pain. this heartbreak. this grand canyon cutting through our dreams. song on repeat. i sing the words behind your back. keep on telling myself. one day i might believe it. my dance was never in tune to your beat. pulse with pulse. beat on beat. turn off the lights. lasers glowing. disco ball broken on the floor. song on repeat. we scream the words at each other. i believe you. broken hearts pumping. the beat we now dance to.

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